Plan Draft

•           Detective asking innocent girl questions about the murder
•           He is asking her to think back to that night
•           Fade to white
•           She is back in her room lying in bed with dirty clothes still on with small blood stains in clothes.
•           She has a headache so she goes down stairs to get a panadol
•           She calls for her sister as she is walking to the kitchen
•           She says, “Katie, where are you?” Walks into the living room.
•           Detective asks what happened next
•          Fade to white into a flashback of her seeing her sister on the ground
•           Shot from her point of view looking at her sister
•          Shot of her sisters point of view with someone standing behind her about to hit herzq
•           Detective asks, “What’s the last thing you remember?”
•           Fade to white her lying on the ground knocked out next to the window
•          Opens her eyes a tiny bit to see a man fleeing..
•          Detective asks, “What did he look like?”
•          Innocent girl says, “He was very tall, but I didn’t see anything else.”
•          Detective says, “Thank you, you can go now.”
•          Girl walks out of office.
•           Side detective walks in ask’ “How old was the girl?”
•          Detective reply’s “12”
•      Side detective throws 5 newspapers on the table and says “we need to get him, according to this he will be kill