Monday, May 27, 2013

Plot Outline



Scene 1
  • Starts in detectives office
  • Detective asking Emma questions about the murder
  • He is asking her to think back to that night
  • Fade to white
Scene 2
  • She is back in her room lying in bed with dirty clothes still on with small bloodstains in clothes.
  • She has a headache so she goes down stairs to get a panadol
  • Emma calls for her sister as she is walking to the kitchen
  • Emma says, “Katie, where are you?” Walks into the living room.
Scene 3
  • Detective asks what happened next
  • Fade to white
Scene 4
  • Flashback of her seeing her sister on the ground
  • Drops glass of water
  • Shot from her point of view looking at her sister
  • Shot of her sisters point of view with someone standing behind her about to hit her
Scene 5
  • Detective asks, “What’s the last thing you remember?”
  • Fade to white
Scene 6
  • Emma lying on the ground knocked out next to the window
  • Opens her eyes a tiny bit to see a man fleeing.
Scene 7
  • Detective asks, “What did he look like?”
  • Emma says, “He was very tall, but I didn’t see anything else.”
  • Emma says “That’s all I can remember, I don’t remember anything else”
  • Detective says, “Thank you, you can go now.”
  • Girl walks out of office.
Scene 8
  • Side detective walks in ask’ “How old was the girl?”
  • Detective reply’s “12”
  • Side detective throws 5 newspapers on the table and says, “we need to get him, and according to this he will be killing again tonight.”

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